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An Addendum to "Leslie’s Retreat"

An Addendum to "Leslie’s Retreat"

Here we are at the start of 2008, thinking once more of resolutions, new beginnings, and some endings. So I’m beginning this new year by adding to the ending of the episode of "Leslie’s Retreat." My aim was to limit "Major Pedrick’s Ride and Leslie’s Retreat" to the same number of lines Longfellow wrote in "Paul Revere’s Ride" as well as follow his rhythm and rhyme scheme. By doing that, something had to be left out..

Shame on me. I left out the incident with Sarah Tarrant, the only woman I found that had been quoted from the memorable activities of that day. From the articles I read, I tried to include all names still in use today in this area. Tarrant was not among them. Many women in the crowd at the North Bridge were active, shouting and throwing objects. (Tomatoes were mentioned, though I can’t picture tomatoes being thrown on February 26, 1775.).

Sarah was the only woman named. Apparently her shouts were loud and clear, noted by all, and had an obvious effect on Colonel Leslie. I decided that she had a right to have her part in the action described. Thus, this new ending, though well over the line limit, replaces the last four lines written in the previous issue.

They lowered the bridge; the Redcoats marched forth

With fife and drum, thirty rods to the north.

They kept their chins up; they showed British pride,

Though it was hard with shouts from the crowd.

Then, "Go home! Go home!" Sarah Tarrant cried,

From her window, her sharp voice extra loud.

Dishonored, Leslie’s troops marched on

To armed minutemen lined across the road.

Then, "Halt! About face! March! " They went on.

Back by Dame Sarah, who continued to goad.

 

"Fire at me, if you’re brave enough!"

She shook her turkey-wing duster as sword.

With harsh insults her words were rough,

Showed Leslie’s troops had brought shame to the Crown.

Back over the bridge and through Salem town,

To Marblehead their vessel to board.

Their fifes played "The World Turned Upside Down."

The title itself seemed apropos,

When out of sight their heads hung low.

"First armed resistance," they reported to Gage,

 And "first blood shed," let both sides know

Soon there would be fierce battles to wage.

Many a man in the crowd that day

Made his final decision on which side to go.

As Colonists they demanded their say.

With "their cries of defiance and not of fear"

Our fight for freedom began right here.

Answers to the Readers’ Challenge.

1. Names mentioned in this historical tale which are still in use in this area today are: Leslie, Pickering, Foster, Orne, Derby, Mason, Barr, Felt, Sprague.

2. Which line is taken directly from "Paul Revere’s Ride"?

"With a cry defiance and not of fear" describes Joseph Whicher just before he receives a very slight jab from a Redcoat’s bayonet, and produces the "first blood shed". With a slight change it is repeated in the next to last line, and applied to the Colonists.

3. What lines is based on a quote from Winston Churchill?

"Up with such nonsense, we will not put." This was Churchill’s response to an editor who dared to correct him when he made the "capital offense" of ending a sentence with a preposition. "This is the kind of arrant nonsense up with which I will not put."